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Distro-specific instructions reordered to reflect (assumed) diffusion of each of them.
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 ![Screenshot](https://github.com/neroth/gnome-shell-extension-weather/raw/master/data/Screenshot.jpg)

-**gnome-shell-extension-weather** is a simple extension for displaying weather information from several cities in GNOME Shell.
+**gnome-shell-extension-weather** is a simple extension for displaying weather conditions and forecasts in GNOME Shell.

-Compared to the original version, this fork brings you : multiple city, no WOEID, a symmetric style, and a settings panel in JavaScript (Seed).
+Compared with the original version, this fork features: multiple locations, no WOEID required, a symmetrical layout and a settings panel in JavaScript (Seed).

-Currently, the weather report including forecast for today and tomorrow is fetched from [Yahoo! Weather](http://weather.yahoo.com/).
+Currently, the weather report, including forecasts for today and tomorrow, is fetched from [Yahoo! Weather](http://weather.yahoo.com/).

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 # Installation

-**At end of installation restart GNOME Shell (`[Alt]+[F2]`, `r`) and active the extension in `gnome-tweak-tool`.**
+**After the installation, restart GNOME Shell (`[Alt]+[F2]`, `r`) and enable the extension through `gnome-tweak-tool`.**

-## Package manager
-
-### [Arch Linux](https://aur.archlinux.org/packages.php?ID=56028)
-
-Make package form AUR and install.
-
-	wget https://aur.archlinux.org/packages/gn/gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git/gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git.tar.gz
-	tar xvzf gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git.tar.gz
-	cd gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git && makepkg -si
+## Through a package manager

 ### [Ubuntu](https://launchpad.net/~xeked/+archive/gnome/+packages)

-Add the PPA **ppa:xeked/gnome** in your source list, add key **0B5C004838624188** form `keyserver.ubuntu.com`, update package list and install **gnome-shell-extension-weather**.
+Add the PPA **ppa:xeked/gnome** to your source list, import the key **0B5C004838624188** from `keyserver.ubuntu.com`, update the package list and install **gnome-shell-extension-weather**:

 	sudo add-apt-repository ppa:xeked/gnome
 	sudo apt-key adv --recv-keys --keyserver keyserver.ubuntu.com 0B5C004838624188
 	sudo apt-get update
 	sudo apt-get install gnome-shell-extension-weather
+	
+### [Fedora](http://download1.rpmfusion.org/free/fedora/updates/testing/17/i386/repoview/gnome-shell-extension-weather.html)

-### [ALT Linux](http://packages.altlinux.org/en/Sisyphus/srpms/gnome-shell-extension-weather)
+Packages for Fedora 16 and 17 are available in the [RPM Fusion](http://rpmfusion.org/) repositories. If these are not enabled on your system, please follow [these instructions](http://rpmfusion.org/Configuration); then run the following command (with root privileges): 
+	
+	yum --enablerepo=rpmfusion-free-updates-testing install gnome-shell-extension-weather

-Install **gnome-shell-extension-weather** with apt-rpm from Sisyphus.
+### [Arch Linux](https://aur.archlinux.org/packages.php?ID=56028)

-	sudo apt-get update
-	sudo apt-get install gnome-shell-extension-weather
+Download the package from AUR, make and install it:

-### [Fedora](http://download1.rpmfusion.org/free/fedora/updates/testing/17/i386/repoview/gnome-shell-extension-weather.html)
+	wget https://aur.archlinux.org/packages/gn/gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git/gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git.tar.gz
+	tar xvzf gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git.tar.gz
+	cd gnome-shell-extension-weather-neroth-git && makepkg -si

-Packages for Fedora 16 and 17 are available in the [RPM Fusion](http://rpmfusion.org/) repositories.
+### [ALT Linux](http://packages.altlinux.org/en/Sisyphus/srpms/gnome-shell-extension-weather)

-If they are not enabled on your system, please follow [these instructions](http://rpmfusion.org/Configuration); then run the following command with root privileges: 
-	
-	yum --enablerepo=rpmfusion-free-updates-testing install gnome-shell-extension-weather
+Install **gnome-shell-extension-weather** with apt-rpm from Sisyphus:
+
+	sudo apt-get update
+	sudo apt-get install gnome-shell-extension-weather
 	
 ## Generic

-Make sure you have these dependencies :
-* `dconf`.
-* `gettext`.
-* `pkg-config`.
-* `seed`.
-* `git`.
-* `glib2`.
-* `gnome-common`.
-* `autoconf`.
-* `automake`.
-* `intltool`.
+Make sure you have the following dependencies installed:
+* `dconf`,
+* `gettext`,
+* `pkg-config`,
+* `seed`,
+* `git`,
+* `glib2`,
+* `gnome-common`,
+* `autoconf`,
+* `automake`,
+* `intltool`,
 * `gnome-tweak-tool`.

-Run the following commands :
+Run the following commands:

 	cd ~ && git clone git://github.com/Neroth/gnome-shell-extension-weather.git
 	cd ~/gnome-shell-extension-weather
@ -75,7 +73,7 @@ Use the `Weather Settings` button to edit the configuration.

 ![Screenshot](https://github.com/neroth/gnome-shell-extension-weather/raw/master/data/weather-settings.gif)

-You can also use `dconf-editor` or `gsettings` to modify some parameters from the command line.
+You can also use `dconf-editor` or `gsettings` to configure the extension through the command line.

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@ -88,7 +86,7 @@ Copyright (C) 2011 - 2012
 * Elad Alfassa <elad@fedoraproject.org>,
 * Simon Legner <Simon.Legner@gmail.com>,
 * Simon Claessens <gagalago@gmail.com>,
-* Christian METZLER <neroth@xeked.com>,
+* Christian Metzler <neroth@xeked.com>,
 * Mark Benjamin <weather.gnome.Markie1@dfgh.net>

 This file is part of gnome-shell-extension-weather.
@ -97,4 +95,4 @@ gnome-shell-extension-weather is free software: you can redistribute it and/or m

 gnome-shell-extension-weather is distributed in the hope that it will be useful, but WITHOUT ANY WARRANTY; without even the implied warranty of MERCHANTABILITY or FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE.  See the GNU General Public License for more details.

-You should have received a copy of the GNU General Public License along with gnome-shell-extension-weather.  If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
+You should have received a copy of the GNU General Public License along with gnome-shell-extension-weather.  If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.